In the Works...But I Need Your Opinion

Hey! So I need your help. Yes, YOU.

Was just messing around with words, and I was wondering if you guys had any input. Lol, it's a half-written song. Basically it's about FRIENDSHIP and relationships. And before you sigh, it's actually a happy song. Hahha. Don't let the first verse get you down. it gets happier. lol. So, lemme know what you guys think. :)

Verse 1
I've been thinking about the times we spent,
Eventho' I know I shouldn't be,
But when was it wrong to look back at the past?
And how the hell did it all go by, so fast?

Verse 2
I remembered the day we first met,
Was it in kindy, or elementary or something like that?
I said "hi" to you, all you said was "cat",
And thru the weirdness, I knew one thing, that

Pre-Chorus:
Must've been something there cause you were blushing,
Then reality snaps back, and I'm back here saying,

Chorus:
How did I find myself in this place?
This life of mine is finally taking its pace,
How did I find myself with you?
I'm the luckiest paleface, and you're my lucky horseshoe.


That's it for now. Will be putting a few more lines into it. lemme know wad yu think about it. Good or bad or whatever. I appreciate it alot!! :D